Today we presented to our groups, tutors and external marker. The presentation went well but I'm keen for some notes on my presenting skills.
Here is feedback on my project and my thoughts.
- It's clean I love my idea.
- The causes seem a bit random, try to make them consistent. I discussed this and think they are constant; see my previous post about tone.
- Mock up a test book ASAP
- Might need to separate the patterns and white space might be needed.
- I need time to analyse the book and give it a big revision before hand in (reflection time, restructure time). This means the 3 weeks of October are; week 1 - design, week 2 - revise, week 3 - print.
- Is a book the right format? For some people it could be a call to action and needs to grab people more. The visuals and concepts would be great in more loud media.
- Deciding the audience will change the format.
IN RESPONSE - over the next few days I will
- Plan 3 different book layout (only do 1 of them)
- Plan 3 different sets of additional collateral (only do 1 of them)
ALSO
Not sure what tone to take; is this a first person book about me, my suburb and interest (hence my casual language) or do I need to keep it professional/book shop friendly?
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